by xtremeflat Thu Jan 29, 2009 12:14 pm
The first and second really don't have much flow in them. The text in the second one is actually not too bad, it matches the rest of it. All in all the first two are kinda boring, and the text in the first one doesn't match.
The third one is just filter-raped, you should lessen on the filters. The colors are pretty good on it, but the text doesn't match it at all.
Just keep practicing, I know I sound like I'm just bashing your artwork but criticism is the best way to become better.